The Journal of Korean society of community based occupational therapy (대한지역사회작업치료학회지)

Korean Society of Community Based Occupational Therapy Association (대한지역사회작업치료학회)
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The affect of Writing Programs on the Writing Strategies of College Students - Focused on the Occupational Therapy Students -

글쓰기 프로그램이 대학생의 글쓰기 전략에 미치는 영향 - 작업치료 전공 학생 중심으로 -

  • Paik, Young-Rim (Dept. of Occupational Therapy, Doowon Technical University)
  • 백영림 (두원공과대학교 작업치료학과)
  • Received : 2018.03.22
  • Accepted : 2018.04.24
  • Published : 2018.04.30
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Abstract

Objective : It is one of the most important job tasks to write to occupational therapist, so I want to apply the writing program to the students who use mobile language as the main communication and to investigate the effect. Methods : This study was conducted with 7 freshman students for a total of 10 sessions, once a week, for 2 hours at a time. In addition, after reading the recommended books, I made a total of two manuscripts with the book report and then carried out the supplementary instruction. Changes in the writing program were made using self - questionnaires and changes in the writing of the manuscripts were confirmed by the number of times. Results : As a result of the self-questionnaire, the participants considered the logical aspect of the writing and the consistency of the writing after participating in the writing program, and after the writing, the grammatical aspect was reviewed and the sentence was revised. In addition, the number of secondary corrections was reduced by an average of 7 times more than the number of primary corrections. Conclusion : In order to create a document which is one of the important tasks for occupational therapist, systematic education will be needed to create a more logical and grammatical error-free article.

목적 : 모바일 언어를 주 의사소통으로 사용하는 작업치료 전공 대학생들에게 글쓰기 프로그램을 적용하여 그 영향을 알아보고자 하였다. 연구방법 : 본 연구는 대학교 신입생 7명에게 주 1회, 2시간씩 총 10회기 동안 글쓰기 프로그램을 진행하고 추천된 도서를 읽은 후 독후감으로 총 2회 원고지 작성을 하게 한 후 첨삭 지도를 실시하였다. 글쓰기 프로그램을 통한 글쓰기 전략에 대한 변화는 자가 설문지를 사용하였고 원고지 작성에 대한 변화는 첨삭 지도 횟수를 확인하였다. 결과 : 자가 설문 결과 참여자들은 글쓰기 프로그램 참여 후 글의 논리적인 면이나 글의 일관성을 생각하게 되었고 글을 쓴 후 문법적인 면을 검토하고 문장을 수정하게 되었다는 내용의 문항에서 통계적으로 유의한 변화를 보였다. 첨삭 지도 횟수도 1차 첨삭 지도 횟수보다 2차 첨삭 지도 횟수가 평균 7회 이상 줄어들었다. 결론 : 작업치료사에게 중요한 직무 중 하나인 문서 작성을 위해 보다 논리적이고 문법적인 면에서 오류가 없는 글을 작성하기 위한 체계적인 교육이 필요할 것이다.

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