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Feedback on Peer Feedback in EFL Composing: Four Stories

  • Huh, Myung-Hye;Lee, Jang Ho
    • 영어영문학
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    • 제57권6호
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    • pp.977-998
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    • 2011
  • The purpose of this study is to investigate prospective teachers' perceptions of the peer review comments readily available to them during the writing process in a teacher training class. Given these needs, we employ a qualitative method of inquiry giving voice to the learner's own view of peer feedback. The data we wish to consider is first-person narratives elicited from four EFL college students, who are prospective teachers of English. With regard to the EFL students' narrative considered here, all were attentive to the feedback they received. Moreover, the way in which these EFL writers talk about peer response activity reflects that they still welcome peer feedback because of the benefits to be accrued from it. Although this study, covering only four EFL students in total, can hardly be considered conclusive, we attempt to offer a synthesis of their stories. First of all, students indicate that they received responses from "authentic readers" (Mittan 1989, 209). We do note, consequently, that students gain a clear understanding of readers' needs by receiving feedback on what they did well and on what seems unclear. Perhaps the greater effect of peer feedback claimed by these students is that they take active roles in utilizing peer comments. Since they feel uncertain about the validity of their classmates' responses, students feel that they have autonomy over their own text and can make their own decisions on whether they should accept their peer comments or not. This contrasts with their treatment of teacher comments that they accept begrudgingly even if they disagree with them. Four EFL writers talked a lot, typically in a positive way, about peer response to their writing, yet they have expressed reservations about the extent to which they should put any credence in comments offered by their fellow students. Perhaps this is because their fellow students are still developing writers and EFL learners. In turn, they were sometimes reluctant to accept the peers' comments. Thus, in EFL contexts, L1 use can be suggested during peer feedback sessions. In particular, we have come to feel that L1 use enables both reviewers and receivers to have more productive peer review experiences. Additionally, we need to train students not "to see peer feedback as potentially bad advice" (Silva et al. 2003, 111). Teachers should focus on training students to utilize their peers' comments. Without such training, students will either ignore feedback or fail to use it constructively.

가상 온라인 기사 포털에서 아바타의 존재와 반시민적 댓글 피드백에 대한 행동 순응 (Compliance to Feedback on Uncivil Comments in a Virtual Online News Portal: The Role of Avatar Presence)

  • 박윤정;금희조;이세영
    • 문화기술의 융합
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    • 제10권1호
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    • pp.419-425
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    • 2024
  • 디지털 커뮤니케이션이 차지하는 비중이 높아질수록 무례나 혐오와 같은 반시민적인 댓글과 이에 공감하는 행동 역시 증가하고 있어 이를 해결하기 위한 사회적인 노력이 요구되고 있다. 이러한 노력의 일환으로서, 우리는 반시민적인 댓글을 남기는 행위 뿐 아니라, 이에 대해 공감하는 행위 역시 반시민적인 것으로 규정하여 가상 뉴스 포털에서 아바타의 피드백이 사용자들의 반시민적 댓글 공감 행동에 미치는 영향을 탐구하고자 하였다. 이를 위하여 먼저 사회적 논란이 있는 뉴스를 가상 공간에 게시하였고, 함께 게시된 댓글들 중 참가자들이 반시민적 댓글을 선택할 때 텍스트로만 된 피드백과 아바타가 같이 등장하는 피드백인 두 가지 방식으로 피드백이 이루어졌다. 이후 피드백이 행동 순응에 영향을 미치는 메커니즘을 파악하기 위해 행동 순응, 죄책감, 인상관리욕구를 설문을 통해 평가하였다. 그결과, 텍스트로 된 피드백보다 아바타가 피드백을 제공하였을 때 참가자들의 사회적 반응에 큰 영향을 미치는 것으로 나타났다. 특히, 아바타와의 상호작용은 참가자들의 행동 순응과 죄책감, 인상관리욕구를 높였다. 우리는 아바타 기반의 상호작용이 사용자들의 사회적 행동과 태도에 긍정적인 변화를 가져올 수 있음을 확인했다.

Lessons Learned from Twelve Korean Teachers of College-level EFL Writing

  • Kim, Mi-Kyung
    • 한국영어학회지:영어학
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    • 제3권2호
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    • pp.181-210
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    • 2003
  • The purpose of the study was to investigate how Korean EFL writing instructors give feedback to their students' writing and what influences their feedback. A total of 12 Korean EFL instructors in Korean universities teaching freshman English and intermediate EFL writing courses provided their feedback given on students' writing samples and participated in interviews. Interviews were analyzed qualitatively with a constant comparative approach and some data from writing samples and questionnaires produced descriptive statistics. The first lesson from the results of the study was that grammar was still the most frequent concern in giving feedback on students' writing. Contrary to the participants' report, comments on content and organization were not produced very often. The second lesson came from the interview data. Some aspects of teacher feedback seemed mostly influenced by their beliefs on L2 writing and experience in teaching L2 writing. The final and major lesson was that teachers chose how they would give comments on students' writing depending on whether they found their feedback helpful in students learning to write. EFL writing teachers can produce effective feedback by clearly communicating their beliefs about L2 writing and criteria in their feedback to students in their EFL writing classrooms.

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EFL Students' Beliefs and Processing Behaviors toward Writing and Teacher Response

  • Chin, Cheong-Sook
    • 영어어문교육
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    • 제13권4호
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    • pp.1-32
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    • 2007
  • This study took a cross-sectional, quantitative approach and profiled EFL students' awareness of the writing process and of teacher feedback. The subjects were 113 college students aged 19-26 years from non-English majors, who were enrolled in three sections of a required English course. According to the scores gained from the essay writing assignment, they were divided into two groups (proficient and less-proficient writers) and responded to an in-class survey. Major findings were that: (1) the vast majority of both groups did not find English writing enjoyable; (2) longer comments gave rise to substantial changes to the students' revisions; (3) the less-proficient writers were shown to benefit from revision significantly more than the proficient writers; (4) Both groups of writers utilized multiple strategies to process teacher feedback and preferred to receive teacher comments using complete sentences rather than phrases or single words; and (5) teacher's marks on grammar and vocabulary claimed to be most conducive to EFL writing development. Several important implications for EFL writing instruction and for future studies are suggested.

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1, 2세 영아-어머니의 가정에서의 책 읽기 상호작용 (Mother-Infant Book Reading in the Home)

  • 채유진;김명순
    • 아동학회지
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    • 제20권2호
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    • pp.125-138
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    • 1999
  • This study explored mother-infant interactions during reading of picture books with and without printed words. The interactions of 40 mother-infant dyads(??) were video-taped while mothers read the books aloud to their 1- or 2-year-old child at home. When reading the books with words, mothers used more "where" questions and gave more feedback to the non-verbal behavior of the infants. Mothers gave more labels, descriptions, predictions, and "what", "function/activity" questions when reading the wordless book. The infants used more nonverbal answers reading the book with words. The mothers of the 2-year-olds used more "what", "function/activity" questions, and gave feedback to their verbal behaviors. The 2-year-olds used more imitation, verbal answers, and comments. For the mothers of the 2-year-olds, the interaction with the wordless book led to more attention-recruiting and bridging. For the children, however, reading the wordless book led to more labels, questions, and comments.

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Learner Interpretation of Teacher Corrective Intention of Feedback in EFL Classrooms

  • Kim, Ji-Hyun
    • 영어어문교육
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    • 제17권1호
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    • pp.81-99
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    • 2011
  • The role of corrective feedback (CF) has long been discussed in the field of second language acquisition. It has been claimed that CF enables learners to notice the problems in their second language (L2) production. However, it should not be assumed that learners always adequately interpret teachers' responses to their problematic utterance as correction. Especially when feedback is provided in an implicit way, the possibility that CF goes unnoticed should not be excluded. In this regard, the study aims to investigate how learners perceive teachers' corrective feedback in English classrooms in Korea. The study focuses particularly on examining the relationship between type of feedback and target linguistic content with learner interpretation of teacher corrective intention. Nine classrooms were observed and videotaped. Forty-five students and nine teachers participated in stimulated recall interviews. Their comments were analyzed to document the learners' perception and the teachers' intention of feedback. It was found that learner perception of teacher corrective intention was at its greatest when feedback was provided explicitly and was focused on morphological errors.

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공동구매형 소셜커머스에서 신뢰메커니즘형성을 위한 머천다이저의 피드백코멘트와 성과프로파일의 역할 (The Role of Merchandiser Feedback Comments and Performance Profiles in Building Trust in Group Buying Sites)

  • 박종필;임혜미;손재열
    • 경영정보학연구
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    • 제16권1호
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    • pp.1-15
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    • 2014
  • 소셜미디어(social media) 플랫폼의 인기와 성공은 새로운 비즈니스 모델인 소셜커머스를 창출하게 되었다. 공동구매를 통해 파격적인 가격으로 제품이나 서비스를 제공하는 소셜커머스 시장은 계속적으로 주목할 만한 성장을 하고 있다. 그러나 이러한 성장의 이면에 소비자들의 회의적인 시각도 존재한다. 왜냐하면, 구입한 제품이나 서비스가 실제와는 다르거나, 불합리한 환불정책 등으로 소비자들의 불만이 고조되고 있는 실정이다. 이러한 근원적인 이유는, 소셜커머스 마켓에서 소비자들이 의존할 만한 신뢰형성메커니즘이 제공되지 않고 있기 때문이다. 기존의 e-마켓플레이스에서는 판매자(seller)에 대한 구매자의 평가정보가 일종의 신뢰형성메커니즘을 제공하여 거래의 안정성이 보장되었다. 이러한 점에 착안하여, 본 연구에서는 소셜커머스마켓에서 소비자들에게 물건이나 서비스 정보제공에 있어서 일종의 큐레이터 역할을 하는 MD(merchandiser)의 역할에 주목하고, 신뢰형성메커니즘을 기반으로 MD에 대한 피드백코멘트와 MD의 실적프로파일 정보의 제공이 소비자들에게 어떠한 영향을 주는가를 검증한다. 이를 위해, 124명의 참가자가 실험실(laboratory experiment)연구에 참여하였다. 실험분석결과, MD에 대한 피드백코멘트와 실적프로파일이 소셜커머스 거래에서 신뢰를 높이는 것으로 나타났다.

Incentivizing User Contributions in Idea Crowdsourcing through Quantitative and Qualitative Feedback : A Field Experiment

  • Cho, Sook-Hyun;Lee, Sang-Min;Moon, Jae Yun
    • Journal of Information Technology Applications and Management
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    • 제21권3호
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    • pp.19-33
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    • 2014
  • Crowdsourcing is a popular tool for firms to harness external knowledge and resources. One variation of crowdsourcing entails the use of corporate channels in social network services (SNS) such as Twitter to hold public idea competitions. This study examined the role of feedback interaction between participants of idea competitions. More specifically, the study examined the impact of incentives to provide feedback on other participants' ideas. We found that idea competitions where explicit incentives were introduced to elicit crowdsourced feedback in the form of qualitative comments resulted in improved idea generation performance-with more ideas generated overall, and more ideas generated through participant collaborations, through increased comment-posting activities. Based on the findings, implications for theory and practice are discussed.

일반 화학 수업에서 설명적 피드백을 이용한 개념도 학습의 효과 (The Effects of Concept Mapping with Explanation Feedback in the Undergraduate General Chemistry Course)

  • 고한중;김경수;강석진
    • 한국초등과학교육학회지:초등과학교육
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    • 제29권3호
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    • pp.341-349
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    • 2010
  • In this study, the effects of concept mapping with feedbacks providing explanatory comments on students' achievement, science learning anxiety, and science learning motivation were investigated in the undergraduate general chemistry course. The aptitude-treatment interactions between students' level of mastery goal orientation and the concept mapping with explanation feedback treatment were also examined. Sixty-seven freshmen from an university of education were assigned to a control group and a treatment group. The tests of mastery goal orientation, science anxiety, and science learning motivation were administered as pretests. For the treatment group, feedback providing students with explanatory comments through whole class discussion was presented after each concept mapping. Whereas the control group students were presented with opportunities solving excercise problems followed by explanation feedback. The intervention was lasted for 10 weeks (30 class periods). After the instructions, a researcher-made achievement test, the science learning anxiety test, and the science learning motivation test were administered. The results indicated that no statistically significant difference was found in students' achievement. In the science learning anxiety, however, the scores of the treatment group was significantly lower than those of the control group. The scores of the treatment group also tended to be higher, though not significant, than those of the control group in the science learning motivation. However, no significant aptitude-treatment interactions were found in all dependent variables.

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Examining the Effects of Trained Peer Feedback on EFL Students' Writing

  • Kim, Bo-Ram
    • 영어어문교육
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    • 제15권2호
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    • pp.151-168
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    • 2009
  • The present study investigates the impact of trained peer feedback on the quantity and quality of revisions made by EFL students at a low-intermediate level. Peer review training was carried out in experimental group through four in-class training sessions and four peer dyad-instructor conferences after class. Students' $1^{st}$ drafts with written peer feedback and revised drafts prior to and post training were collected and analyzed. Results reveal that after training the students produced more revisions in response to their peer comments (96% of total revisions) and those revisions were counted as enhanced in quality (93% of peer-triggered revisions). In contrast, the results of paired t-test within control group indicate that there was no significant difference between two data collected from week 3 and week 16 (t = -.57, df =19, p = .577 at p < .05). The findings suggest that training as an ongoing process of teacher intervention contributes to effectiveness of the peer feedback activity. The study provides pedagogical implications for how to structure and implement peer review training for the sake of its direct strength in an EFL writing class.

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